I evn gasped out loud at the parts of killing women and children. this is truly a work of art.

Awesome!! I love how you wrote it as a story, and you described the events that happened really well. I like how you made the elves something close to evil.

"What you once were has been broken,
and what you are now is not right.
You run from those who were once friends,
you run from the life giving light!"

These were my favorite lines, great job! Keep writing.