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| Tay 2004-02-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseThats great gurl, keep it up I want it finished LOL ! |
| echoes of chaos 2003-10-06 ch 3,  | abusei really like the way the story is flashing back and forth and you're seeing the way she got killed. just one question though - if tyler and erin are in their twenties, why still living with the mom? irrelevant, just a question that passed through my head |
| echoes of chaos 2003-10-06 ch 2, | abusethis sounds very interesting...but now im kind of confused. |
| Radtastic Sharpie 2003-10-04 ch 3, | abuseaw this guy has some real problems don't he? good job |
| Radtastic Sharpie 2003-09-27 ch 2, | abuseHey Great job slighty confusing in some parts but i like'd it but like i said it's a little confusing in some parts but I'm sure as the story goes along it won't be. Kept writting more to it, you know i'll read it all. As for a guys name... Shawn:P! -Meleodince Cathrel |