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Ambergirl1029 2008-04-29 . chapter 1
hello,

since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams

thank you,

Amber
Ambergirl1029 2007-10-18 . chapter 10
i like the story but its a bit hard to understand so i couldn't completely finish it i mean wheres the true mystery and stuff the story's good but seriously re-write it to make it clear i mean no offense or anything its really good other than that

-Amber
NewWayOfLife. 2007-09-18 . chapter 1
hey this is really good. I like it so far!
Missy.Insane 2007-09-17 . chapter 11
why did u stop updating?!! =(
its realy a good story

the last update was on 07-04-04
and thats 4 years ago lol :P
so plz apdate when ever u can =)
MonkeyMohawk1 2006-02-17 . chapter 11
update...thats it..
[a] 2005-09-20 . chapter 11
aw just when they were about to get set up you stop updating!! *cries* this is a pretty good story so i hope you update cOz it seems you havnt updated for like a year so yehhope to see you update soon.. keep up the good work
the-key-of-the-twilight 2005-05-19 . chapter 11
Hello! I'm reviewing now! YAYness! ^_^ Anyways, please update soon! I really like it! ^_^ This story reminds me of Please Twins! ^_^;; Well, keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight 2005-05-19 . chapter 4
Very nice! *claps* Cliffhanger! ^_^ Anyways, lol about the bagel stuff. I had a bagel once in this crummy store and it tasted real bad! ^_^;; Anyways, I love your story so far and I shall *victory music* read more! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight 2005-05-18 . chapter 2
Hi there, Rella! ^_^ Anyways, nice job! (Oh boy, am I going to review every chapter of your story?) I'm a slow reader. T.T Well, great job! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight 2005-05-17 . chapter 1
*jumps up and down in joy* YAY!! Thankies my reviewing my story! *bows* I really appreciated that! ^_^ Anyways, I like this story and I'll hopefully read some more once I have a little more time on my hands. I'm glad you like Kilo because most people don't! lol (By the way, Kilo is probably around 17 or so...) Well, bye! ~the key of the twilight

P.S I did get the Children of the Devil ideal from Spiral! You're pretty observant! ^_^
Raindr0ps 2005-01-30 . chapter 11
I like this story and it's plot which I still honestly don't understand. Three Ken's are kind of confusing. ^,^ Keep writing.
l. fayette 2004-11-30 . chapter 11
OH! They're being set up! I do it ALL the time for my friendz, man! LOL. Update soon!
LghtAngel 2004-07-15 . chapter 11
oh NICE CHAPTER!! you got me thinking!! i can't wAIT to you update!
T. Riddle 2004-07-05 . chapter 11
woo an update! There's so many things going on. They're going to meet at the computer store, I think. How interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Ken2 to see what shall happen with all the many Kens.
Zoey7 2004-07-05 . chapter 11
hey there! this was a very good chapter. but i think sometimes you would change the tense in which you writing. just keep an eye out for that. anyway, i feel kinda bad for Sam. Christina seems really nice...just a bit too preppy. but i still like her! and regarding Katie: grr! that girl still bothers me. at least she respects what Ken wants. she gets points for that. but she still loses points for being, well, herself. i loved this chapter! happy 4th of July! update soon!! ^_^
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