I love that...Be wind swept. Hmm, I'm not sure why though. I;ll have to ponder on it for a little while. I love the word choice, and the flow. I got a little caugt up in it. I've read a lot of your stuff, but never commented. I don't know. I'm afraid of something. But hey, gotta leap sometime. So, I'm off that safety ledge. The way you describe things in your poetry...it gives me chills. You are wonderful and very talented writer...I think it's amazing. I'm actually very jealous...but still amazed.
Aurora

That put me into a good mood. It's so pleasant you can't help but smile after reading it~ ^_^

Excelletn! I just have to say that you did a marvelous job putting together words with connotations and feelings associated with the wind. I like the format at the end. Nice message, too.

A very insightful title. This all works and flows together and well. :) A great piece.

Blessings,

Greenbug

great piece!

Wow. . .like the poems AND how you did the last line.

"Be wind swept", you say...how can I be windswept when there's barely any WIND in Calif? ;_; (jk jk)

Brilliant poem, I mean it, and now I'm going to make SURE that a poet as great as you are is on my Author Alert list!

I must first say that to tell you I am impressed by your work would truly fall short of the glory it deserves. I have read several of your pieces and find each one stunning in different way. It is amazing that one person could produce so many beautiful pieces of literature, and for that I commend you.
But more than for you writing, I must be thankful for your attitude. What you have said in your bio you uphold in your actual writing. Making it something for people like me to enjoy.

~ Yabou ~ SL

"When asked if they could fly, some just unfold their powerful wings and ask...how high?"

wind nice. especially on a hot summer day ^^

A great moral to be taught ... very original.

Powerful... good.

great poem! i especially like the third stanza and love the format you put "wind swept" into. wonderful work. keep on writing!

Wow! This is amazing. And true. So true. I loved the formatting at the end! I really made you knotice those words, and helped to make the reader realize the point. Am I making sense? Anyway, that was a brilliant poem!

~ CoolBeans18s

A very important message! Well done again! I really like the format at the end...hehe...great idea!

~Stoffpferd~

I liked the ending, very very neat. Good work!