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| the duck in the rain 2004-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseI love that...Be wind swept. Hmm, I'm not sure why though. I;ll have to ponder on it for a little while. I love the word choice, and the flow. I got a little caugt up in it. I've read a lot of your stuff, but never commented. I don't know. I'm afraid of something. But hey, gotta leap sometime. So, I'm off that safety ledge. The way you describe things in your poetry...it gives me chills. You are wonderful and very talented writer...I think it's amazing. I'm actually very jealous...but still amazed. Aurora |
| Kuroi Kenshi 2004-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThat put me into a good mood. It's so pleasant you can't help but smile after reading it~ ^_^ |
| PainKiller 2003-10-14 ch 1, | abuseExcelletn! I just have to say that you did a marvelous job putting together words with connotations and feelings associated with the wind. I like the format at the end. Nice message, too. |
| Mir-Firiel 2003-10-12 ch 1, | abuseA very insightful title. This all works and flows together and well. :) A great piece. Blessings, Greenbug |
| soulspring 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abusegreat piece! |
| Cloudie 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. . .like the poems AND how you did the last line. |
| Mime 2003-10-04 ch 1, | abuse"Be wind swept", you say...how can I be windswept when there's barely any WIND in Calif? ;_; (jk jk) Brilliant poem, I mean it, and now I'm going to make SURE that a poet as great as you are is on my Author Alert list! |
| sleah 2003-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI must first say that to tell you I am impressed by your work would truly fall short of the glory it deserves. I have read several of your pieces and find each one stunning in different way. It is amazing that one person could produce so many beautiful pieces of literature, and for that I commend you. But more than for you writing, I must be thankful for your attitude. What you have said in your bio you uphold in your actual writing. Making it something for people like me to enjoy. ~ Yabou ~ SL "When asked if they could fly, some just unfold their powerful wings and ask...how high?" |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abusewind nice. especially on a hot summer day ^^ |
| Crow08 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abuseA great moral to be taught ... very original. |
| WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abusePowerful... good. |
| obsidian katana 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abusegreat poem! i especially like the third stanza and love the format you put "wind swept" into. wonderful work. keep on writing! |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is amazing. And true. So true. I loved the formatting at the end! I really made you knotice those words, and helped to make the reader realize the point. Am I making sense? Anyway, that was a brilliant poem! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Stoffpferd 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseA very important message! Well done again! I really like the format at the end...hehe...great idea! ~Stoffpferd~ |
| Lidless Eye 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked the ending, very very neat. Good work! |