   Guardrail 2006-09-09 . chapter 1I liked this a lot. Great haiku, keep writing. |
 Ultimate Schuyler 2004-08-04 . chapter 1O.O Frreakin'. AWESOME! |
 Franken 2004-02-23 . chapter 1Sweet. Keep writin', more Haikus if you can, love those.
~~Franken~~ |
 Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-02-16 . chapter 1Wow.
Can I say more? I love the simplistic style of haiku, and I love the way you've writtin lies like a spider's web (aren't they, after all?) Awesome. |
 Sun Chime 2004-01-04 . chapter 1I like the way you've written (the disconnected style, you know what I mean?) A nice read. And thanks for the review. |
 dawningfear 2003-12-02 . chapter 1The title is excellent.
Makes me wonder who was building the highways when you wrote this poem... Makes me wonder who is buliding highways now ^_^;;
Good stuff ^_~ |
 pippin tomson 2003-11-17 . chapter 1fantasic as always!
Sword in the Storm
; ) |
 Kelpylion 2003-11-09 . chapter 1Oh...beautiful, subtly worded. You made every word count in this one, and it has a truly unique texture...silk, oil, and ice. (good poetry has texture. That's just how it feels to me.) The last line is particularly dramatic. |
 Needa S 2003-10-16 . chapter 1Wonderful job! |
 Free-Writer 2003-10-12 . chapter 1Wow! I like this. You always write good haikus. |
 Mir-Firiel 2003-10-12 . chapter 1This is so true. Well done, as usual. :)
Blessings,
Greenbug |
 OracleVIII 2003-10-11 . chapter 1How true. Nice. |
 soulspring 2003-10-09 . chapter 1interesting perspective/metaphor. nice! |
 Seras Nova 2003-10-06 . chapter 1I don't enjoy too many Haikus, but for this one I'll make an exception. Nice work.
-Seras |
 Mime 2003-10-04 . chapter 1*frowns at her e-mail* Somehow, I did not get Author Alerts for these new ones. 0_0 *makes a mental note to check the list of people on her Author Alert list*
Anyway, this is a great haiku! It reminds me of that old phrase, "Walking on thin ice!" (Don't ask why, I'm not sure if I'll be able to explain) |
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