I liked it, who says weird dreams can't be a good thing. I wonder, are you obsessed with Inuyasha's ears like my sister?

Geezz... What a...weird dream...But of course which dreams aren't weird and unusal?
Great poem (sad but still great)!

You know, that's weird. I had a dream a lot like that the other night. O_o

Cool writing. The second line is neat; slightly...morbid? I don't know, not really the right word. Bizarre in a very interesting way? Something about those sort of weird-sounding lines in writing that I like...

Cool stuff. :)

But...I LIKE dark Inuyasha fics before bedtime! And your rhyming seems only a bit cliche, more melencholy, if anything. I liked it, I don't usually like reading rhymes, and such...or maybe I just don't like WRITING rhymes, too constricting (^_^)