|Reviews for Lit string|
| JJR Meerraf 10/11/03 . chapter 1
Yep, I've been there before. An excellent feeling was portrayed there. Beautiful stuff and excellent rhyming, I loved the last two lines. Keep it up!
| Papillons Noirs 10/1/03 . chapter 1
Ouch. That sounds bad (the day, not the poem)! This sort of seems like humor, though. Anyway, sorry if it's not supposed to be funny.
| Nerf 9/29/03 . chapter 1
This is reli gd! i luv it!
i reli like the repitition of
'And I walk home with a look of 'I'm fine'