| Reviews for Lit string |
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JJR Meerraf 10/11/03 . chapter 1Yep, I've been there before. An excellent feeling was portrayed there. Beautiful stuff and excellent rhyming, I loved the last two lines. Keep it up! |
Papillons Noirs 10/1/03 . chapter 1Ouch. That sounds bad (the day, not the poem)! This sort of seems like humor, though. Anyway, sorry if it's not supposed to be funny. |
Nerf 9/29/03 . chapter 1This is reli gd! i luv it! i reli like the repitition of 'And I walk home with a look of 'I'm fine' Well done! XXNerfxx |