i think this is great! i like your works... i think i've been inspired. i can relate to this alot, cause i always have a problem dealing with memories...

I reli like this, the title is quite strong, well chosen.

Keep writin. Well done.

I don reli see any need for improvement on this one.

XXNerfxx

Good message. It might not be your best poem ever, but it was still pretty dang good, I don't see too many needs for revision. Excellent and superb as always me10. Great stuff!