 Juliet Squared 2004-02-29 . chapter 1I didn't find this very funny. I found it more on the angsty, meaningful, let-me-be-myself poem. Notice I said angsty. I normally don't like angsty poems because they are way too common on this website.
HOWEVER, your poem here was actually expressing a point other than "I'm going to slit my wrists, why the f* do you care, if I kill myself then the world will be a happier place!" No. It wasn't like that at all. The fact that it was saying "Let me be who I am, I won't lie and be something I'm not" which is a totally good message.
Very, very well done. |
 Incubabe 2003-11-30 . chapter 1This is not really "funny" so much as moving.
I don't know what it is, I think it's the images you conjure with such normal, everyday words.
I love the final two lines and a curse on your therapist for finding it funny. Fool.
Diana xx |
 Hunny622XoXo 2003-11-05 . chapter 1its funny in a bitter sarcastic way and i have loved ur work so far...u have a really cool way of twisting words around to be comical and yet meaningful |
 pennydeath 2003-11-02 . chapter 1That is not funny at all. Powerful. Very not funny. You wrote this so well... *favs* |
 avidelecteur 2003-09-28 . chapter 1Oh, that's sad, not funny. I didn't quite understand it toward the end, but I think I got the gist of it. My friends would all complain that you have actual sentences, but I *like* to be able to understand poetry, lol, so I prefer complete thoughts. Another good one.
btw, I love your pen name. It's absolutely perfect for you, at least from what I can tell from the 2 poems I've read so far. |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-09-28 . chapter 1I don't see it as hilarious. I like it a lot because it has a lot of meaning and feeling, and its an original way of expressing yourself. Keep it up. |
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