THis is incredible. It is so peaceful and calming and beautiful. You paint one of the most beautiful pictures. Ah! I love this poem!

Very long, yet very well written. I like it. And also very decriptive, I love that.

Simply wonderful. *claps* Normally I don't read story poetry this long, but I'm glad I chose the read this - the imagery was stunning; you really felt like you were there with the subject. Very good - you have a wonderful style. ;)

Tenika Dargan