This is good. And there is no need to duck. I am not going to throw anything at you*drops brick behind my back* You are taking the time to read and correct them, you are doing nothing but helping improve my writing. And for that I am very thankful.

I love simple poetry like this - it's short and most certainly sweet. I found the last two lines especially touching; they really made me smile. Once again, well done!

Tenika Dargan

Realy good, Very detailed :) i like it