this poem is good...the only thing that could maybe have been improved on is to elaborate the emotion a bit more...otherwise it's very good.

aw this is so sad.

So sad . . . But so true. I think everyone's felt like this at least once in their lives; you're just one of the few people to sucessfully put it into words. Another touching piece; well done.

Tenika Dargan

great poem i like it. and umm on my poem 'Mater Luna' the line at the bottom is defined in the description. Thanks for the reveiw. And keep writing. I love your poetry.

ah, its preatty, sad but preatty, I like it. Good job.

Angsty emotion-filled poem. I could relate to this...that feeling. I think many can too. You expressed it well. Thanks for sharing...

Write on!

Jess 0:o)