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| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-07 ch 6, | abuseWoo, I never knew reviewing every chapter of something could be draining. I'm tired. Lol. Maybe it's the time...but yea. I couldn't /not/ do this one too. Hahahahaha. I think once you become a slash addict, you see it in everything. Which is a good thing, but definitely bad if you're watching something with family. Anywho (being tired makes me ramble. Sorry?)...His dad seems incredibly creepy. Obviously. And evil. Kind of feel bad for the people...especially Neil, because he was getting hurt because of the /horse/. Some people, yea? [I cannot choose between my father and Neil.] *sigh* Lol. That's absolutely something to understand...SO, I really adored all of these. Seeing more would be awesome, but even just these is enough to make me very happy. Much love for writing them… |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-07 ch 5, | abuseI think out off all of these, this one is my favorite. There is just something about stories like these (set in a little shop...so on...) that makes me completely fangirl even at the though. *much ** love* That is so great, the one he's (Miguel) so forward. There should definitely be more people like that (and if they want to say it in a different language, a million points to them.) [Pure fear, he told himself.] Sure...Lol. I find it amusing that he has no idea what it is. So useful. (really, seeing that /something/ happened next...) And you know that I loved it, hahahahaha, just like I'm sure eveyone else did. Aww. Fluffy ending. The best kind, of course. |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-06 ch 4, | abuseHahahaha. Thanks for the warning. I will keep it in mind as I read...[“All right,” he says slowly, still watching me cautiously; as if I’m about to jump him and ravage him.] What a screwed up way to react to it, although I guess it's kind of expected in a way, you know? But hey, at least he seemed to still care. Still. *pets the sad one* Which makes me feel like it's kind of awkward not knowing a name in this. Lol. Oh well. Aww. Painful kisses. I'd like to think he doesn't do something completely stupid now...but I guess we may never know. Heh. Loved this one too (of course.) |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-06 ch 3, | abuseWow. This one, not so fluffy, but ** amazing so I love it all the same. Really, really adore the way you wrote it. It seems to me very much like it would really be like...how he's not very focused on the actual situation (if I'm catching it right.) Ooh, and I love the whole different POV thing. It works well, and I was hoping to find out what had happened before he got hit anyway. A very nice way to find out (and it makes the story feel...balanced? Not quite sure.) As for the ending, I like it. Left me wanting more, but not completely /dying/ for it (which is a definite good thing.) Hmm. Yea. To the next one... |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-06 ch 2, | abuseThe first line is enough to make me melt. Lol. Of course, then you read on and I want to beat him in the head for not believing him, but it's all good. (I kind of, sort of read ahead. I know. Shame.) [He was the classic rebel when I met him, too young to own a motorbike, but driving one anyway...] I really liked that part. It's just...nice (in a 'I'll most likely remember that later' sort of way, if that makes sense.) Ha. Yes. He should feel guilty now. And the ending is so damn sweet. *lovelovelove* |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is so fluffy, and cute, and completely fangirl worthy. I just ** adore it. Now I must review them all...but before I get to that...I love how (WHAT) they're arguing about. [“And if I’m gay, you’re going to be my boyfriend.”] He's so damn pushy, but I can't say I blame him, especially since he cracked at the end. Ah. Much goodness. I know this is definitely something I'll read when I need a fluff-fix. |
| fbarlolken 2005-02-04 ch 4, anon. | abusea realistic vignette!hm. this is how life works. blake has my sympathy. |
| Lady Alexiel 2004-07-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh my god! You NEED to continue Gamble! Please! Ah, and I love the others too!^^ |
| r.mai 2004-01-25 ch 5, | abuseha ha ha ha ha ha. no carrot cake. ha ha. ha ha. oh and. “I am sorry, but you’re expression is priceless!” it's your. *nod* i think you do a lot. i can't remember though. *goes back to sipping on my avacado shake* next story! |
| r.mai 2004-01-25 ch 4, | abusei took that better than i thought i would... maybe it's the fact that my mum said she was too tired to on the internet shock... more internet time for me... and ya know what... i hope the lake was completely frozen over. stuff happens. you get over it... hopefully. |
| r.mai 2004-01-25 ch 3, | abusecliff hanger = bad. and i gotta call it quits for the night. it's sad how i take turns going on the internet with my mum. damn dsl ppl. i hate dial up. welps, be seeing ya laters! |
| r.mai 2004-01-25 ch 2, | abuse*gags on my avacado pearl shake* that was sweet. i liked this too. i suspect i'm gonna like practically everything you write. |
| r.mai 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseha ha. i found that amusing and sweet and weird lol. |
| Germaine Amundsen 2004-01-15 ch 5, | abuseAww! That was adorable! |
| desolus 2004-01-04 ch 7, | abuseOkay then, off to your bio for Shadows of Solitude! |