wow! how do you do it? i love it. it's so cute. (yeah, i know that's not the word you were looking for, but..) i love how the lines come together, and the words just melt. you had me gripped from "mists of memory", "balls of time", and held on til "open fingers of time". wonderful! fave? yes, fave! it just makes so much sense.

nice. No flames? well, i don't flame. abit more detail might be nice. but it's a poem, i shouldn't expect more. U a 'realist'? well, to be real is not always the best. i know, u absolutely disagree, heh heh.