AH, god, I would read your stuff, it is so good. This is so not fair. No single person should be able to write this good...WHO DID YOU KILL to gain these writeing powers...TELL ME. Go to your local book store and go to the writing section. They will have whole books on publishers and and addresses. For poetry and writing. Trust me go to a borders they do here. My friend has like ten diffrent ones.

Good for you - I say a person always has control of their lives. I like this piece because it makes the reader think, and it brings up a different perspective on suicide. Very well done - I congratulate you!

Tenika Dargan

A very powerful piece with a strong start and finish. You described the emotions very well in this piece, you truly did.

Thank you for your review on my poem. I truly liked this one.