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Jen84 2004-08-22 . chapter 1

Jess, you write so beautifully of the stars. I think I'll have to take a look outside into the night sky in a few minutes. Thanks for reminding me of them. Jen

Bob n Kazzi 2004-07-26 . chapter 1

Urgh I hate you so much. I hate how you make me read a poem and I imagine exactly where I would be stood, where I would be looking up at the stars. i don't really hate you, I just envy your ability to do this. I love you and your writing really.
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Urgh *she pouts* Could you have a looksie at my short(ish) story called "Falling" please? And also my other short(ish) story "That Guy". I love you and your writing so I would love your opinion. Thank you!

Urto 2004-06-30 . chapter 1

Wow thats pretty darn good. How come your stories get a whopping 25 reviews and im lucky to squeeze past 8?! I NEED MEDICATION...I mean help. he..er...LOOK OVER THERE!

Carl, Epitome of Evil 2004-05-10 . chapter 1

I like this better than the first. The way you wrote it made it fun and made me think. Very cool.

Shuffle Queen 2004-05-07 . chapter 1

You could turn the worst writing into Newberry winning material...working with your own masterpiece...it was superb! ^^ Later.
~Shuffle Queen~

Juliet Squared 2004-01-09 . chapter 1

Again, this is amazing. It works well as free verse, too. Great work :-D

SVoi 2004-01-04 . chapter 1

I like that one its cool!

Aslan Israel 2003-12-18 . chapter 1

Another great piece of poetry! You really know how to capture the essence of things, like the night sky. You have a great gift; so keep up the great work!

cosmo-queen 2003-12-15 . chapter 1

Interesting take on your original poem. Once again, you really capture the lights of the night sky. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Cirien Phoenix 2003-12-06 . chapter 1

This is very pretty and I really like it! Great poem!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-11-12 . chapter 1

Ah, beautiful imagery and metaphors. Wonderful job. Yes, loveliness and peace in the ignorant darkness...

eew 2003-11-03 . chapter 1

~ Wow. I love this poem! Really great words and descriptions. They're like short words that form a great tapestry in the sky. Keep Writing. I mean it.

c. butterfly~**

Genesis Angel 2003-10-21 . chapter 1

I wouldn't have guessed that there were so many ways to describe light. lol.

Caitir 2003-10-04 . chapter 1

i love that! It's happy, which is unusual, and it's very melodic. very nice.

JTierra1988 2003-10-04 . chapter 1

I like it!! "Gazing up Into the night Fastened in Their silver trance" is very visual and creates a good picture in my head ^_^|/ JMBunny

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