I really like it so far! I'm actually writing a similar story. =)

Great plot! I really loved it(:

it was very good

(i don´t know about marching) but band rocks! lol. the only bad thing for me is the teacher.lol. strangley, all the cool and fun people (not that i am one) are in it so it´s pretty intertaining. lol. i play the oboe and i´m pretty safe to say that the oboe (achm hobo...lol) beats colorful hair any day.lol.

oh...in the summary i thought her cousin was a boy so i was like "huh?" but now i know! hehehehe. i like it. short but still sweet. cuts to the details like it should. (in my opinon) "this is my story" is a littke cliched though...oh well..lol.

I love the way you started your prologue.
It makes me want to read more,
which is what i'm gonna do right...
NOW! =]

Haha! Don't hate on band and emo kids! Though I'm sure you don't. That was hilarious! happy happy happy! I'm glad this epilogue wasn't cheesy or anything and that it was so funny!

AW! I'm so happy! I mean, you knew they were going to get together... but, AW!! I love ti that it wasn't perfect at all! And that she was stepping on his foot and stuff... hee hhee! AW! I'm so happy! Great story! Now I'm on to the epilogue!

As a student at William and Mary I feel the need to tell you... no male specimens. Except the kind you want to put in jars. They're all balding, taken, or gay (or some variety thereof). Now I'm depressed again. Ho Hum.

AH! No! I have to leave my computer now to go somewhere! I'm so sad I cant' finish reading now... this ROXORS! But I'll be back later!

ok so I was only going to read the prologu cause I felt like I didn't have enough time to read the whole story, but I'm hooked already!

Very cool story.

It was really good
The ending was sweet till Dr.Feldman show up

what happened to shawna?

So good! But, what happens to Shawna? Another story perhaps?