I love it! I want to learn the language, it's so beautiful. I especially like the way you have approached abuse, I hope he gets what he deserves :p

this is really good you should write more.
VR2004

A wonderful story, I can't help but wait for more.

Well, I like the Frena, by far, because they are happily ruled by a woman who has 'sound judgment' that just made me smile, of course she has sound judgment. I also find it suspicious that the evilness avoids the humans, maybe they are in cahoots, lol, i guess i will have to read more yto find out.

*grins* Larn is pretty. :p
*steals and puts in a little box*

hoorah! dragons! I love dragons! I love this story! Haha, i can't wait to read more, this story is so good!

This is a really good chapter. It's informative, but interesting. Well done. :)

**...is that girl living a hard life!! if i were her..i would kick him in the $#@%!

well..enjoying it so far! write more!!

Exciting, I am excited to read about women warriors and dragons! Ellezira is a mad cool name, I can't wait to read more about her, I hope her life gets better, in the meantime, I can't wait for you to update.

Yay, you kept the "spat venomously" bit! :D Hehe..

I like the way you ended it. *grins* That was quite sedate for you :p hehe..

Mad cool, I like prequels, and this is getting farther than the other if I am not mistaken, and it would be good to have a prehistory, I like this one a lot already, its got elves and fighting women, I'm addicted, I can't wait to read more.

O *looks all starry eyed* Where do I sign up to fight? :D
Wonderful writing Emme, now keep it going *grins*

Damn Emme! This is delightful writing...just damn!
{ek!! Can you do me a favour and give me a clue to how you spin these tales? I want to write half as good as you.}
*Hobbit wanna be Gollum/Smeagol Hugs*

Nice! And wow, have you ectually made up an intire language?! That's like so cool! Really it is. But well, like your story and hope you'll update soon

~Quinda~

wow...i like ur story so far
everything is so well written!
and i loove the translations down teh bottom!!
did u make em up by urself!?!?