This is a terribly sad poem, but it's written well and I like it a lot. I think that the last stanza is my favourite part, it's the sort of thing that will stick with me for a long time after reading. Great job. Lozfairy x

I don't know why but this line sings to me "The alarm clock reminds me of you." Yes I'm well aware that I'm strange but... Great poem though. Beautifully written for such an early time in the morning!

I love the title...the poem is interesting...i like it. my favorite line is 'and picture frames of you are frozen with conjured smiles.' one thing, please, don't use online abbreviations in poetry. it will slaughter a good chunk of the respect i have for you. (cuz...::gags::)please don't do that! i love your penname too...you hate japanese culture? why? well, maybe i just don't understand because i'm not myself...but i never had anything against my heritage. in fact, i adore mine. anyway...i won't judge you on that. nice job. write more. ^^

"I kind of feel broken
And a little twisted
Maybe bent the wrong way"

I love those lines. I really really do. I felt awfully sad reading this.. I've felt a little like it before.