hmm. i like this one! its so tranquil. like a place no one can reach, far beyond anyone's grasp.

Wow. This is beautiful... I'm lost in wonderland...

I think I visit a simular place... it is the place I go to escape reality and to drift into the world of my own dreams :)

Woah... I love the imagery used, it's simply beautiful, especially the second and third line. The poem really shows the longing of the persona for the haven she/he wants to be. I skimmed through the summaries of your poems, they all seem to have this 'memories' thing attached to them, some surreal quality, continue to write lovely poems, babe!

Many of your works seem to be of an eternal search and a connection, or a quest for truth, something to hold on to, and belonging. I can relate to that. May you find what you seek, and keep writing. With love.

The imagery is really great and I do like the theme conveyed in a way one doesn't usually see

Wow, beautiful imagery here, I can picture it perfectly in my head. I'd like to find a place like this, sounds so beautiful. Oh and your extensive vocabulary made this poem even more of a work of art. Well done.

*Jenna*

Wow. . .Your descriptions are so lovely! You're really great at poetry, you know. Poem/Author added to favorites! .

Nice to see a free verse poem done so well, and with so much emotion. Liked this.

Mia

This Poem Is A Good One

It Intrigues Me To Look Back On The Secrets That I Have Kept For A Long Time . . . And If All Of My Secrets Were Safely Kept . . .

Your A Good Writer Serene, And Besides I'm Close To You Also, I Know That All Poems You Write Came From Your Own Exp.

Keep It Up Girl! ('',)

I love this poem, very beautiful. Thanks for R&Ring my works.

'M. Your poems have a lot of meaning and truth behind them. Keep up doing what you love.