   Prowling Muse 2003-10-25 . chapter 1The phoenix is a wondrous creature. Reborn again and again, renewed from a pile of ash... its old self.
I love this haiku. Dunno how you captured beauty in a 5/7/5 word pattern. |
 soulspring 2003-10-09 . chapter 1great imagery! |
 CoolBeans18s 2003-10-08 . chapter 1This was absolutly breath-taking! I think phoenix's are really cool, and I loved the way you described it. Amazing poetry!
~ CoolBeans18s |
 The Black Rider 2003-10-05 . chapter 1An absolutely breathtaking haiku. You are truly one of the best writers on this site. |
 Keep it 100 2003-10-02 . chapter 1Wow. This was beyond gorgeous. Such great work.
~Heart of the Sword |
 splotchikins 2003-10-01 . chapter 1Oh wow~! This was simply fantastic and beautiful! I loved it! =D
-Enchantress Azure |
 Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-09-30 . chapter 1Simply gorgeous! Sorry...it seems like I've abandoned you lately...::Cringe:: As it seems with most of the people I love on this site...I'm so sorry. I'll get my life together and come back to living for reviewing...anyway, ah, I love a beautifully wondrous haiku. You're one of the few I've found who do then right. |
 Kay Harlow 2003-09-29 . chapter 1You did a really great job. I liked the 2nd line, it really molded the whole feel and stood out. This is a really excellent poem. |
 unbeautiful 2003-09-29 . chapter 1Awesome. |
 condemned Hope 2003-09-29 . chapter 1guter haiku.
mir gefällt besonders gut die Art wie du beschreibst ich kann mir das rictig in einem Bild vorstellen. |
 Lady B.V Rose 2003-09-29 . chapter 1Oh...wow...^^; hehe there's only so much ya can say at night after a LONG day...I...err...love it! (Oh I am so original...clap for me...yay...)
- Nicole xx |
 Lidless Eye 2003-09-29 . chapter 1Very enchanting, and well-written... great job! |
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