wow, seriosly wow. that was good, i mean you kept to a story that went over time, and it kept on rhymeing which is always good, at least i like it. it was sad, but so are some of my stuff. and thank you for reviewing my poems, im glad you like them, i have a song or two of my own, but i would be to embarresed to put them up, cuz basicly they suck haha, keep it up!!

hmm.. it was liek a song... just lacking a chorus... nothing to say... I like cookies...


~C Shot~

I don't get if you're angry or sad..
and I can really relate to this poem,
in astrange way..
it's awesome..
I really liked it..

That's really sad... But very good!