Sypathic poem. Direct and effective.

Great poem! Love is a battlefield.

Short and sweet. The transition between the first and second paragraph was so sudden, it was like who! Great stuff though, and a great feeling was portrayed. Good work!

I can relate better to this.. again I love how you say the same thing in different words & the ensing is great!

*g* very cute.

lyv

Incredible poem, that last line was great.

Keep writing!

That's really good, flows well. Kind of sad.

this is pretty...and it makes the reader want to know the whole story of what happened. lovely.

thx for the reviews, sorry ti took so long for me to review u

Great piece. It was effective to start each line with "you".

Heart of the Sword

Short and sweet. Like it a lot.

Spawny

hey sugar! i love this poem. very very good. u learned well young grasshopper. and i can so realte to this. lol. i'll catch ya tomorrow...

and the reviewer is back! yay! w00t! lol

Arashi

wow. i can relate so much. just broke up with my bf of 2 years recently and it's so true wht you're saying. the emotion you write with is awesome.

"You hardened my heart with your Battle of Love. " it can't be said any better than that .keep writing. this is awesome!