AA, it gets more exciting! Short and sweet. Time is really getting so short nowadays aren't they? It is very frustrating I have to admit. But as my mum once told me, the stress stops you from putting on weight ^^'

Surely if she had learnt to write from a newspaper, the newspaper would have had correct spelling?
The last line was very effective, and the chapter is well written. It's good.

Ah, so the story begins to move forward. I am intrigued...continue ^^ *glomp*

This is so intriguing. It really reminds me of that huge debate we had in English...maybe one day we will use DNA engineering to fix irregularities but I wonder if we'll eve figure when to stop? ^^ Anyway keep writing!

I really like your title by the way [remind me of my name ^^]

*wipes eyes* so sad...wouldn't the Integran have compassion though? If they're perfect, then they'll have been created with loads of virtues...
It's really good...and sad...
Please write a new chapter soon?

Oh, that's so sweet, I like how you got the whole sister relationship going...it's sad almost how little they seem to be compared tot he World.

It's good...and sad...
I like the doomful future predictions...
Are you going to write this one to a conclusion? I hope so...
It's very good. Please continue it soon!
Can you check that you always open and close speech? You've missed it a few times here.

It's very good...and sad. I like it. Are you going to write this one to a conclusion?

Oh..intriguing. I like the title and the descriptions you used..just continue XD (not good at reviewing)