Y_Y It almost made ME cry...I get emotional from time to time, yeah...but this was so good, I'm serious. Great job!
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Young'n'HopelessKid

hey... this is really wierd... first of all thanks for your review...

i clicked on the link to your poetry and the first poem in your list happens to be about someone i know?!

Well, i know a wicked girl called Jess whos Dad died this time lsast year.. live in Lichfield. etc.. I think thats more than just coincidence...freaky..

I never met her Dad, but i still love the poem.. really great.

I still cant believe this is coincidence..

How did you find my poems?
Simon

This is good, and full of emotion.

ok this is a great poem.. great emotions & im sure your friend would love it... the ending is great... the only thing is theres a lot going on in this poem maybe separating the emotions into separate poems mite be better