great story. it was really interesting. i liked it. it was one of the better storys on this site. great topic. you wrote the story well. i love it. it's awsome.

OH! Complete! Exciting!

Great story, but I've already told you that a number of times.I love Fred, he's great. Keep it up, I can't wait to read another *complete* story! WOOT WOOT!

Oh, and I'm thrilled I could help. Love co-writing with ya. You hafta come to New York. We'll kick the world's **. Or maybe we'll kick it in the shin and run away. Whatever. It'll be fun!

Love always,
Kristine

hahaha! I registered here! dude!

Love the story, you know it! Can't leave a long review...homework...bleh...anyway, love it, put up the rest!