I've thought about this subject before, and I have to say that you express it far better than I ever could. Bravo!

Kyahh~!! *emotional overload* ^-^ Your reviews make me so happy !! You are too kind. ^-^

So true...Beautiful in many ways. Never stop writing. ^-^

~* Noelle *~

So true... Sorry I'm behind in my reviews but I stay so busy now-a-days. Awesome job!

Wow, that was really something. It felt like I was watching a ghost fade away from existence or something like that. Very cathartic.

True. It is amazing how much one life can be so significant, yet so insignificant in the big scheme of things.


~Heart of the Sword

nicely done! "an evanescent shadow" great line!

nice! short but very expressive!

Yeah, it's amazing how much our lives mean to us, but when you look at them from eternity's point of view, we're just a drop of water in the well, so to speak. Keep writing!

awsome, really gets the reader to visualize the blink of time we have on this earth, and to use it the best we can

Excellent! To me, I felt a kind of repetition in the final three lines... like, the imagry... I can't explain it. :) Anyway, awesome poem, and keep writing!

Wow! So brilliant, so true. I loved the imagery in: Soon to flicker out like/a flame in the wind. We're like nothing. A grain of sand in an infinite beach. I loved this one.

~ CoolBeans18s

o...like this. Like this a *lot*. It's so true, too; we see our lives as so important, but they really aren't; in the scheme of things, we're just tiny little ants a few lightyears from planets and stars so huge and incomprehensible that we can't even imagine them...just finite, short-lived beings..."one blink in eternity." Perfect. And beautifully phrased, as well. Going onto the faves list...

~lyv