oo this is cool. once again i envy the fact you can write free verse so well. you'll have to read some of my poems when i get them submitted here.

Vrey well done, depicts the loners... well... the loners right? very well. I hate school's social ladder... even though mine is basically a bunch o uniforms and stuff... u noe.. dominating cliques.. bah...

oh my god... that was so good please tell me when you write more!