Truly mystifying! Your poem is unique in the sense that it provides readers with another perspective as to how night is like. Beautiful, vivid descriptions. Great job!

this is beautiful. the words all flow so beautifully, giving the reader beautiful visual images as it goes... a perfect scene, perfect description. lovely

Yeah, I agree. The last line is redundant. >P

Good poem though. ^_^ Byez! ^.~

Nice. You have some good, concrete images. Only one line seems not to fit with the others: 'And as you walk past your breath smokes.'

Aside from that... in the line, 'Deep in the depths of a midwinter's night,' the word 'Deep' seems a bit redundant. If you're within the depths, then of course you're in deep.