wow. T_T that is so sad yet truthful. i can sort of relate to luck girl.

That's really good, but very sad at the same time. You can tell that real emotion went into this.

I love you too!

This is just...wow.

I love the self-expression. It's a real change in your writing-style, and sometimes it really does help to write about stuff. But I can tell you put a lot of yourself into this, and it shows.

Dude.

That was...dude.

That was really impressive. It was almost rhythmic, like a poem instead of a story. And it was so pretty and sad and gritty... Damn. This is going under favorites, just for the sheer poetry-ness of it. Very, very good.

so so sad. i've had something like that happen to one of my friends...such a horrible tragedy. stupid guys...but there are some good ones. I hope you make it through your hard times.

What is there to say?

I love you.

And I cry because I know how very close to home this poem is..it's you in words.

Tainted skin and dirty blood...

You are so, truly, ethereally amazing.

i think i know what you're talking about and if i do, it's not your fault. be brave and u'll get through it. it'll never completely go away but don't let it stop you from becoming someone special who could make a difference.