Oh wow. Nice ending. very cool.

-reganBaxter

Oh my God! That was such a good story!

I was riveted, I had to read it all at once! I thought Kyle would save her, but what reason did he have to shoot her? Was it because she knew everything about what they'd been doing?

I loved it, and I'll read a few more of your stories!

Love Jaqki

! I loved the ending! I totally thought Kyle was going to be a good guy. I really liked this story. One of my favorites so far that I have read on Fictionpress. =]

That was the coolest thing i've ever read. Great job.

WOAH! sad ending. I didn't think it would end like that! the ending was a surprise that i especially like!

erm that ending was kinda weird..but the plot and stuffs...Wowzers!

Her friends are kinda jerks. I couldn't resist myself. I just had to read one more chapter. But now I'm satisfied and going to to go sleep. Good story so far though!

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

This is starting to sound like something could develop, but all I can think of so far is a town like Silent Hill from those video games, where there was a cult or something. I can't wait to read more, but I may have to wait until tomorrow to do so.

~Cirien Phoenix

This sounds like it could get pretty good. I hope this really shapes up into a nice story. I'm gonna read as much of this as I can tonight.

~Lady Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

P.S. Thank you for the review to the Comedy Skit. I appreciate it.

wah? thats it? oh no... brilliant story... saw the whole kyle thing coming... perhaps if you gave more details about why he suddenly changed his mind about killing her it would make it seem like he was being honest...otherwise excellent story

THat was a screwed up ending...I was so expecting Kyle to be a good guy. It was messed up, but absolutely...Awesome! That was the perfect ending! No one expected it! Keep up the awesome work!!

OH MY GOD! I can;t believe he killed her. That was a very good story, with a great ending.

wow! i have already read 1-4 but 5 is my favorite chapter...so far!

cool

It just... Happened... Out of nowhere... I don't think I've ever seen a movie or read anything that portraid such a perfect sudden ending in my entire life! And here I thought it was going to be an almost happily ever after thing or that Vera would've caught up to them. PERFECTO!