DAMN! That's a long chapter! I'm writing a story called 'Dangerous places' (might change the title) about a group of 4 friends who like to go into places people call 'Hunted' but trouble strikes in one of the hunted places. The chapters are pretty small (VERY SHORT!), Will you read it?

A promising start. Very vivid at the beginning with an excellent similie. The second to last sentence might sound more effective if the order were reversed, "...hated by most, but feared by all." But maybe that's just me. ;) I like it so far. Any plans on continuing?

Interesting! I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story.

Wow1 I really liked you're Prologue! You're a really great writer! please update soon!

Also, i've just joined yesterday with chapter one of my novel, and you can read it if you want. The beginning might seem a little boring.

You've got to write more! i love it so far! PLEASE update soon! :)