I believe you expressed your emotions very well here. This poem kind of describes the feelings of most people in relationships. It's a bit depressing, you shouldn't sell yourself short. I'm sure you're better than you think.

nice poem keeps with your usual writing style. But my opinion, even though I'm only a friend now, is that you are better than you think. I believe your bf will agree with me, as will most of your friends. YOU ARE SPECIAL! never EVER forget that because if you do you aren't you. OH and for what it's worth keep living because you never know what good fortune is lurking.

Nice, could hav been longer, and perhaps a bit less abstract. But aside from that, I kind of know how you feel. Good job.