interesting. some name switches on accident. great story. good twist.

:) CD

This is a nice story. I like it. There are a few typos in various places, but nothing bad enough to affect the story. It was a very fun read.

wow! That's definitley cool! I really liked this and I am hooked

*gotta read more!*

Col. I'll read more later! I like so far-characters are very realistic

Kiara

omg! that was close...

wats going to happen to her and the dude?

gawsh..everything is so tense now...

well..story is going great! hope u post more up soon!

Your story was off to a BIT of a shaky start, but keeps getting better. The plotline is very interesting so far. My advice would be to read through it again and add more things carefully!

Hey really good story I love the way the words flow in your story. I would recommend a bit of spacing cuz it is kinda strenous to read at times. Anyways keep it up look forward to more.

Sivart

PS. If you get a chance check out my story Inflareus's Revenge.

kekekek

the girl reminds me of sumone...ME!

hehe i also have long weird dreams that i can remember in detail..wow...if this girl's dream means sumthin...does it mean my one does? freaky!

well..hope u post more up soon...it sounds like its gonna get interesting!

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