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| Kachie M 2005-07-28 ch 5,  | abusei love vampire stories i cant wait to see how this one unfolds. |
| dancingintheshadows 2005-05-27 ch 5, | abuseThis is a really good story. It's not fair to tease all of us with such short chapters! If the other ones are as interesting though, then go on ahead. (But please don't! I need more!) Keep up the great work! Please update soon! |
| Delanie 2005-05-23 ch 4, | abuseVery nice. -Delanie |
| nightmare of you 2005-05-23 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! i REALLY like this story! :-) |
| Delanie 2005-04-30 ch 2, | abuseUpdate, or I will be forced to take action. lol Sincerely, delanie |
| Jaded Rose 2005-03-26 ch 2, | abuseOkay the only problem I have with this story is that the chapters are far too short for my taste...but the story itself...or what you have wirtten so far is very appealing...I especially like your wording...so please...pleas update... |
| scorchingray 2005-02-17 ch 2, | abusethis is really well written. alot of showing. tis good. would be awesome if you could write some more |
| o0oAnnie 2005-01-31 ch 2, | abuseWow...amazing story so far...but you're being awfully mean with the short chapters :P I loved how you described the "hunger" that vampires have for blood aka "blood lust" it really made me feel like I knew what they were talking about...like I knew how it felt...keep writing! |
| Flying Pigs 2005-01-09 ch 2, | abuseVery well written... Maybe you should combine the first 2 chapters... they're both pretty much just introductions... right? |
| green n yellow fish 2004-08-30 ch 2, | abusebit short, but has great developement potential. keep writing!! xx |
| Ardis Proulx 2004-06-21 ch 2, | abuseVery good definition of hunger for blood. I liked it alot. Keep writing! |
| Isis Bastet 2004-05-11 ch 2, | abuseWell, I will definitely want to read more of this, but I think my only qualm is that the chapter is too short. It was like a second teaser. But I did like what I read thus far, it sounds quite interesting. The first part is just too short though, that's all. Perhaps you should place it on the first page with your real teaser? Just a suggestion. |
| broken-flame 2004-04-04 ch 2, | abusewrite more, please, this is excellent so far! |
| Pineapple River 2004-01-27 ch 2, | abusewow! you are right about this being a teaser all right 0.0 i hope you write more soon! |
| Jukia Wolfcall 2004-01-26 ch 2, | abuseNo! So Short! Ack! Why must you be such a good writer yup write so shortly?! |