Wow. Wow, wow, wow.

I love this.

I bet this could be published, no joke. You should give it a try. It's brilliant.

Hilarious, I couldn't have said it better myself.

Corporal Max Swofford Royal Marines Commando

Hehehe... a very funny satire. Keep writing!

Haha, this was great.

Very well done. You've managed to parodize Poe without insulting him with a ludicrous idea. I'm generally a Bush-supporter, but still I found your poem a very funny read. You're excellent at this, keep it up.

I'm in love with this poem. Seriously. The Raven is a great poem and your parody is brilliant--and so true! The only thing I noticed was that there were a couple of points where there didn't seem enough syllables to fit the line (or too many), but other than that it was very good. Kudos!

Your parody is choppy, but extremely amusing.

Absolutely wonderful. It totally sums up my feelings on the war and the deception the government is using.

Wow! I wish I could do this. I was reading "Slice," too, and you have such a gift for twisting words into set forms without making them rigid. Keep writing!

i love that, that's hilarious

lolness...this is funnyness...me and the Planet Sparkly Strawberrians all love this almost as much as we love Edgar Allie Poe...

Wow i think your writing is great. Im guessing from some of your work that some of it is assignments but its like you mean what you say. Keep staving off the indifference!

wonderfully funny... and miserably true. fantastic job modelling this after the raven... definitely no need to apologize to poe!
one tiny thing - it should be "lie" instead of "lay" in the last stanza, since "shall coninue" is not in the past tense.
otherwise, excellent!

You are brilliant. Kudos to Poe and you for collaborating on such a witty and honest poem. ;)
Love this, alot. alot alot.
favorites it goes.

You are my hero.

Heh.. too true, too true indeed!