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Saikai 2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Is Julian a Boy, or a girl? I got confused in the end, because it said "Still thinking about that girl, the one who broke your heart?" She looked at me...
You said "SHE" looked at me! But she can't choose a wife, but then you said...
"He said he'd wait for me, He said he loved me."
There you said "HE"!
Confused!
Sending mixed messages.
Otherwise it was a great story, but it went by a little fast!
~NEPHTHYS~
Aly1 2003-12-23 . chapter 1
I read this Elfwood, but I'm not sure I get it yet. (Probably something to do with my pathetic, sub-normal intellect, lol). Even so, it's well-written, and I think the end is quite sweet.
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