very pretty... :) nice wonderful imagery.

This is a cute little poem! Good job!

Oh, that was lovely! It's amazing, the way those simple words formed a picture in my mind. The rhymes were very good, wonderful job. ^_^
(Fruits basket, eh? -_-; I've heard of that, but I've never seen it yet...I hope I do soon, though. ^_^)

short lines and easy rhymes turn this nice imagery into a pretty poem! good job.

I like this and i can see why you like this as well! Great job.

i can see why you love this poem, i love it too! it's beautiful. keep writing and i'll keep reading!

oh wow.
That's really beautiful. It flows really well, and while it doesn't state what it's about, it doesn't leave you feeling confused. I love it. Oh, and yes, i am writing more of my story, that's just the prologue, and the story is actually from Laura's POV. Keep writing, Cuz' it's hands down that you're great at it!
~Little Monkey Child

Beautiful poem I luv the last stanza.
Thanx for the review
LP*~*

That's sweet. Short, but sweet. It's written really well, with some really cool imagery. Great job!

great imagery

Great poem, I love the metaphores. i always love the use of light in a poem. Keep writting.

nice descripations! and thanks for reviewing my poem(shadow people)!

oh ^^ how pretty, hehe i like it alot! very nice ^^

M descriptive..I like.

This is so pretty. I totally luv it. Nature poems are always the best. Keep writing.
Thanks for the Review