I liked that. It was creepy and dark, but also beautiful in some strange way.

I like it. Maybe a little on the short side, but pretty good anyway.

Spawny

Brilliant work!

oh my god that was so good!!

Nice, nice. I really like the first 2 lines.
~winged one~

wow sorta reminds me of the vampire Lestat not from the movie but in how Ann Rice described him in her books

Good job

Brandy Bear

Lovely stuff...about a vampire, right? *crosses fingers* Nice imagery. I enjoyed. Keep it up.

Write on!

Jess 0:o)