good questions, all the answers depend upon the person, the reader, the who and what they want in their world.

Wow, I really have to agree to the contents! Great work! _

This was good. The theme was really great I like it and def. agree. The dirty/religious joke didn't really work for me(shows how many religious jokes I've heard, making your point make even more sense!) It flowed nicely and Overall Great Job!

pretty pink:)

i really really like this...its so well written and so true