:D Aw i love this story so much

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This was really great and very well written. I think I would have reacted much the same as Eve. I luv Matt and Toby, so cute. :-)

I just finished the story and I LOVE it. You should make a sequel to the story. Pure awesome. I look forward to reading your future stories and now I just started reading "A Summer Solstice"

This story is awesome so far, I can't wait to read the rest.

So far all of your stories that i've read I really liked so it was no surprise that I liked this one too. I loved Matt he is so sweet. I kinda felt bad for Nate in the end. Took Ricky and Allison long enough.

hey i had read your story at 2009 so i am not sure you would read my review or not ,but still i want to say that you are a amazing writer i had actually read a few of your story. i like how the way you twist your story . you are one of the best writer in this site and a good writer plus a good story deserve a review ^^


-best wish from me

OMG...!! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME STORY;)

aw... that is so cute:)

i lavved the story!

it progressed really well. i felt it:)

i cried. can you believe it, i cried?? LOL:))

great story!

Hahahaha wow, I think my mouth was hanging wide open for the entire chapter. It was a super fast explanation of the family past, but it worked pretty well. I have one suggestion though: if you ever decide to edit the story, do you think you could add a little more intrigue to the previous chapters? I know that Eve was suspicious because Matt kept asking questions, but I didn't really feel the secretive/mysterious vibe while I was reading (when he kept asking questions about the other guys, I just kind of assumed that he was a little jealous maybe?). So yeah, maybe you could add a few more hints that something strange/sinister is going on.

But anyways, I really like this story so far. I haven't read anything like it on FP before, so I'm excited :]

sorry but it's just not my cup of tea, I just keep wanting to yell at them all to shut up!
plus I think the fact that you keep stating the kind of person she is, as opposed to betraying it in how she thinks/action etc is really annoying me (I know it's really hard to do without being obvious about it [and therefore annoying] but generally it involves doing a lot of character studies etc and having some faith in your readers to pick up on it-and sometimes they won't, but hey that's life)

Okay, I really liked this story. I thought that the idea was really original, and I really enjoyed reading it. I especially thought that her reaction to finding the restrictions, instead of being, like "oh, how nice" was more realistic. I hate it when people have unrealistic reactions to things.

great story! :)

Nate really loved her? Oh no. Oh man, no.

And Matt, what's going to happen? I doubt he'll die but...

aw loved it! is there a reason it's under general? I would classify it more as romance... but it's awesomely sweet!!