|Reviews for Rough Draft|
| xWhit3StaRx 4/3/05 . chapter 25
wow, this story was definitely a lot more than what i expected! not that i didn't like how you made it! i absolutely loved it _ and i probably wouldn't have it any other way...keep writing cuz you're absolutely awesome!
| depressed-and-bored 3/19/05 . chapter 13
Good old brother and sister bond. And then Paul just had to come up...
| DuchessYappingDog 2/28/05 . chapter 25
Wow. I didn't cry, but I'm still really, really happy that I read this story. Sigh. That was so sweet. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
| AtlanticHart 2/18/05 . chapter 25
I AM SO BAD! Ok ok so here's what happened...HUGE computer crash last year complete with 22 viruses and a dead harddrive and all of that...anyway had some indication it might have been this website that infected my computer so I'd been avoiding it, but now that I've got all sorts of cool protection gear on the new computer I decided I'd come back...to nothing. Nothing happened. Except I finally finished this story and you made me SO HAPY! Awesome, awesome story, I loved it!
| ve 2/16/05 . chapter 25
such a cute story! such cool characters too! you have no idea what their true intentions are until the very end. keeps me on edge as it unfolds.
| Lindsay Marie 2/10/05 . chapter 24
This was one of the most amazing and beautiful stories i've ever read...Im dying to read the epilogue. Please post it asap!
| green thoughts and apples 12/22/04 . chapter 25
Wow, this story just blew me away! I loved how this wasn't a cliche topic, and you weren't afraid to stray away from some predicatableness. (if that makes sense?) Like, some authors would have split them up for good or cause Eve to fall in love with some random guy just to stay away from the cliche, but the way you kept them together and made their problems real (well, real enough for their situation ;)) was so much better than some complex plot. I loved this story for the way it was written and how you took your time explaining things. It made it much more believable. And definitely the surprises kept me on my fingers while reading. Great job and it's a wonderful story!
| Destiny Violet 10/8/04 . chapter 25
ahh! this is totally the awesomest story ever! AHH! i totally luved how you ended it. *screaM* i read it all! whee!
| Destiny Violet 10/7/04 . chapter 9
ahh! i totally needa finish this but i luv your descriptions:)
| Destiny Violet 9/11/04 . chapter 2
yay:) i'm reading another story! hope this one's good... so far i'm sorta confused about how the giovanni fortune and eve moore go together. but i'm sure i'll get it when i finish reading:)
| Fallen Oblivion 9/2/04 . chapter 25
I loved your "Something Short of Ordinary" stories so much that I had to read this story. I'm speechless from the...amazingness (I have no idea if this word actually exists or not, I'm at a loss for words.) of this story. I read the first chapter and I could not walk away from the computer. I'm blown totally out of the water. I really don't know what to say but "WOW!".
I really want to tell you in person how much I enjoy your writing. If I'm not too much of a coward, I'll message you and tell you.
You're an amazing writer.
Thank you for writing such a lovely story.
| Julia 8/24/04 . chapter 25
It took me so much to finally finish reading this story. First the internet went out (cause Time Warner sucks at the moment, thankfully I don't have time warner cable just road runner) and then before the last chapter, I had to leave to stay the night at my sister's (who does not have a computer) but now I'm finally done. Excellent story, much different from a lot of love stories on .
| Dawn 8/4/04 . chapter 25
A few weak parts here and there, but overall wonderful. I love happy endings! It has taken me 2 hours of reading and I think I'm going blind.
Thanks for a great read.
Look forward to future books.
| Genuinely-xoxo-Superficial 7/31/04 . chapter 24
Hey. I don't know if you'd even remember me but i think i might have reviewed you as "stormy owl-an onymous". Either way, you were one of the first authors I had in my fav stories list (i can't remember that long ago so i'm not sure if u *were* the first or not) but I just wanted to say congratulations! Your writing style and plot have just improved so much and your story's so much more interesting and complex than the other one's you've written. I really loved the bit when Nate said he'd give up his life. I dunno there are lots of nice spots in the story that I reckon you could have elaborated on. (including the nate one) But they're relli good as they are so ignore me if you want.
I don't have a fave character... if I did it'd be Toby cos puppiez are the best. Okok i know that's not helpful. I least expected eve's dad to come back alive but tt was very good. Maybe the rendezvous could have been elaborated on a bit? Those are my suggestions anyway... or maybe more twists in the plot. Okies im going noww... bye!
| Your Chica 7/26/04 . chapter 23
Personally, I like this chapter the best. Heh, the humor in the beginning such as the sentences about the dog towards the reader. Hillarious. Anyway, not to make this short or anything but... Hell it's 7am and I want to go back to bed. So I'm going to finish reading this already.
One last thing: Shake!