|Reviews for Rough Draft|
| calasin 2/27/10 . chapter 25
ah...i love a happy ending.
this was so incredible, that i actually cried a little through some of it... DD
matt and eve are so good together, the chemistry they have is just amazing! i loved the plot, it was fantastic and the way you write is too! ) completely loved it!
| Floppy125 2/25/10 . chapter 25
AW! IT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY!
AND LOVED MATT
| psycho angel 1/9/10 . chapter 25
God, this was amazing!
I bursting right now trying to contain my happy squeal, coz if i don't then my parents will think that i have gone psycho
This was truly awesome!
| AndItMovesUsAll 12/16/09 . chapter 25
Aww that was a sweet ending! I got really into this one and thought the first half of the story especially was great because the mystery gets you hooked. I thik that Matt and Eve had such a beautiful relationship, you really wrote it well. However i think that Eve should have been more shocked and upset when she found out initially about her brothers and matts mafia bussiness, as well as when her dad came back, as it didnt seem like there was much of a reaction, and i know that they were doing it for her sake, but being lied to your whole life would make you hurt. Also, when she found out that she could have married anyone, the focus of her anger was at Matt and Ricky for only doing it for money and honour, and rightly so but i would have thought she would also be angry at them, epecially ricky, for taking away her right to marry someone she loves and be happy, because they didnt know for sure that she would be with him.
Also, though i loved the plot at the end, i think what happend with Nathan didnt make sense because he was just as horrible as the rest of them and then he suddenly acted like he would do anything for her and then killed himself for killing his sister, so that he wouldnt have to go to jail, but surely in his line of businness hes killed before? I mean, it works if his character is meant to be quite unstable, but i dont think it came across that well, it wasnt quite built up properly and his motives werent clear.
Well that sounds like a lot of critism but i really enjoyed this, and cant wait to read more of yours!
| QuickSilverSand 12/5/09 . chapter 2
i like jaye a lot!
| dwpea 11/27/09 . chapter 26
wonderful wonderful awesome awesome story ever written! totally made my day D
| Your Execution 11/14/09 . chapter 25
:D Aw i love this story so much
| claireponcherrii 10/17/09 . chapter 6
| LavenderWolf 9/17/09 . chapter 25
This was really great and very well written. I think I would have reacted much the same as Eve. I luv Matt and Toby, so cute. :-)
| leng 9/8/09 . chapter 25
I just finished the story and I LOVE it. You should make a sequel to the story. Pure awesome. I look forward to reading your future stories and now I just started reading "A Summer Solstice"
| Peace is free 8/28/09 . chapter 7
This story is awesome so far, I can't wait to read the rest.
| 3DarkGoddess3 8/20/09 . chapter 27
So far all of your stories that i've read I really liked so it was no surprise that I liked this one too. I loved Matt he is so sweet. I kinda felt bad for Nate in the end. Took Ricky and Allison long enough.
| WindLessNiteZ 7/18/09 . chapter 1
hey i had read your story at 2009 so i am not sure you would read my review or not ,but still i want to say that you are a amazing writer i had actually read a few of your story. i like how the way you twist your story . you are one of the best writer in this site and a good writer plus a good story deserve a review
-best wish from me
| XxCaptainKoalaxX 7/15/09 . chapter 27
OMG...! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME STORY;)
| ghurl00 7/6/09 . chapter 25
aw... that is so cute:)
i lavved the story!
it progressed really well. i felt it:)
i cried. can you believe it, i cried? LOL:))