|Reviews for Rough Draft|
| intercostalspace 1/1/09 . chapter 14
very good chapter! :D
| intercostalspace 1/1/09 . chapter 12
lovely chapter, esp. the ending paragraphs.
| intercostalspace 1/1/09 . chapter 11
when are they going to admit it to each other and do IT?
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 10
i like that he thought he'd make her fall in love with him. he still doesn't know she loves him already? :)
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 9
cute chapter. :) with the news and all, does this mean she's resigning from her barista post?
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 8
i hope she wouldn't hate Matt in the future too much once she finds out she can marry anyone.
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 6
i'm looking forward to more love stories/scenarios between Matt & Eve.
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 5
oh, is she about to know?
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 4
"Matt will do it." - i like that line. very commanding & really says something in between the lines about Ricky & Matt. :)
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 2
nice chapter 2. i wonder if she'd really break his brother's leg once she knew that he knows something he didn't... LOL
| intercostalspace 12/31/08 . chapter 1
ok i think i'm spending jan 1 in front of my PC reading your fics. :) great 2st chapter.
| carla 12/29/08 . chapter 27
this story was great.
ive read a few of ur stories n i gotta say i fell in love wit this one especially, even though i liked more than a few. keep writing
| flamesflyer 12/27/08 . chapter 27
I started reading this story before the summer months and then got really busy with work and packing and forgot about it. I rediscovered it when I was copying all my links from my home computer to my laptop so I'd have them at school with me. Since I've been home on break I decided that since I liked this story, I'd go through and read your other ones. I can't do much right now other than reading and writing because I'm recovering from surgery. I just wanted to say that you have grown a lot with your writing and I can't wait to read more. Like with most 's work, your earlier stories are a little rough, but it shows how much you have grown. I can't wait to read more.
| bookwormhottie 12/26/08 . chapter 26
Absolutely loved it
| l'heautontimoroumenos 12/2/08 . chapter 27
I just love your story. It's a pity it had to end though.