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Sunset in the Desert
La Solange
2003-10-12 . chapter 1
Wow, that was deep! I can't imagine living in the desert! It must be scary, and like 150 degrees out there, huh? Do you have a sun tan? Do you have a sun BURN? *looks* Oh, yeah... you do.
~c
CoolBeans18s
2003-10-02 . chapter 1
*grins* Like it would be the sunset in Alaska! Anyhoo, great poem. I liked the rattle snake bit too *still hasn't seen any rattlesnakes*
*is waiting to see some*
~ CoolBeans18s
LadyAnesta
2003-10-01 . chapter 1
what a spin to put on the sunset!
"rattlesnakes venture from lair"
i like that part the best.
well done :D
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