Wow, the way you write is really amazing! Your desciptions are wonderful and your characters are very realistic. The tension between Liz, Joe and Jack is really well written. I hope you continue this because I'm sure you'll get a bigger audience soon!

That was really good. I absolutely loved your descriptions and the emotions you described in your characters. Please keep on writing this story! I'm sure something will come to you.

Very nice follow-up to the first chapter. I'm completely hooked to this story, it's that well written. I really wish that I had talent to turn simple traditional love plots into good stories.

That was a very good story.

Even though it contained your classic cheesy three-best-friends love-triangle, you pulled it off fantastically. And I can say that there are few writers out on fictionpress.com that can accomplish such a feat.

Please keep on writing, this is definitely one of the best stories I've read yet.

Keep on writing don't stop no! I loved it this is to good to be just a oneshot. All the charcters were so well written you gave them such depth for such a short work. I really wish you would write further chapters. Also you desciption's were amazing. Keep writing and please update this story- Angelwings

that was cool. you are a little too descriptive though. add another chapter!