nicely described! it's quite a coincidence that i come upon this just after reading about him last night.

Three, no four cheers for you. This is so good... can I PLEASE have your talent? *begs*

FF

wow, i'm afraid i don't know who Akhenaten is, but this was a very powerful piece of poetry nonetheless. the format was great and added a lot to the effect. the one name at the end blew me away AWESOME conclusion there. :) i like it muchly, kudos!

You did a great job on this. Akhenaten was brave when he tried to change the old Egyptian ways. Cool poem.

Heart of the Sword

Wow! You put this so well. Akhenaten was a very interesting person - very brave to try and change the whole Egyptian culture (practiacally) with his new religion. Great poem!

CoolBEans18s

This poem RoCkEd! I love it...it is beautiful, it is truthful, it is full of fact placed so gentally in it that the beauty protects it.

Simply incredible. write on!

La! Nicely done. Funny how the Egyptians had monotheism before anyone else, and the original Jews were henotheists... I like the way this poem makes its point. Lovely.

wow. i...

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what...

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(in english: great poem!)