|Reviews for legacy|
| soulspring 10/9/03 . chapter 1
nicely described! it's quite a coincidence that i come upon this just after reading about him last night.
| La Solange 10/7/03 . chapter 1
Three, no four cheers for you. This is so good... can I PLEASE have your talent? *begs*
| glitterjewele 10/5/03 . chapter 1
wow, i'm afraid i don't know who Akhenaten is, but this was a very powerful piece of poetry nonetheless. the format was great and added a lot to the effect. the one name at the end blew me away AWESOME conclusion there. :) i like it muchly, kudos!
| Keep it 100 10/4/03 . chapter 1
You did a great job on this. Akhenaten was brave when he tried to change the old Egyptian ways. Cool poem.
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| CoolBeans18s 10/3/03 . chapter 1
Wow! You put this so well. Akhenaten was a very interesting person - very brave to try and change the whole Egyptian culture (practiacally) with his new religion. Great poem!
| Miz E. Mak 10/3/03 . chapter 1
This poem RoCkEd! I love it...it is beautiful, it is truthful, it is full of fact placed so gentally in it that the beauty protects it.
Simply incredible. write on!
| Alyx Bradford 10/2/03 . chapter 1
La! Nicely done. Funny how the Egyptians had monotheism before anyone else, and the original Jews were henotheists... I like the way this poem makes its point. Lovely.
| mizu no kokoro 10/2/03 . chapter 1
(in english: great poem!)