I'm sure there's no creepier review than you can get with that one.

But I agree, this is a great small piece.

And I agree with it.

Bravo! *applauds*

I can't stress how much I admire you. How much I'd like to just sit down in front of you and stare you in the eyes, to the point where I can conjure them at will. Or listen as you talk or sing or play or preach, trying to leech out some of your talent with my unworthy ears. Or lick your cheek to answer my lifelong question of what brilliance tastes like.

I try my best not to sound like I'm stalking you, but I think I've failed. Forgive me.

This poem has a point and i agree with it 100%. Great poem.

*applaudes* i agree.

only church takes you're money too

Interesting juxtaposition. You've no love for the church, I see.

My first impulse was to say a bunch of negative things about it, but after reading some of your other work, I see that you do put some thought into your poems. As such, it would be an injustice to respond to it with a flame. I wish I could give a better critique of your poem, but I haven't yet learned enough about literary criticism to do so.

What I can say is that it's interesting. The comparison between Jesus and a prison is certainly jolting.