oh, this is so cool. i actually like it! (note: i like everything i read... literally.) aw, cool! i LOVE swords, dragons, and fire, and falcons, and stuff like that (including anime) and i find it really cool that you like fencing too. i'm starting fencing in september... it looks like it's a blast. anyway, good haiku's. POINTLESSNESS IS YOUR FRIEND! (so is cheese...)

those were rather interesting, and rather strange at the same time.

Fencing Haiku! YAY! Now you need to write an individual foil, epee, and sabre haiku. I like the pen and the eggshell monster too. UPDATE REDEMPTION! this is going to be my message to you until you do, or bring the goddamned notebook so we can do what you want us to with it!

Well, it is kinda pointless. Just a bunch of irrelevant rambling, butI liked the cracked eggshell monster. It sounds cute. I also liked the last stanza. But it's basically good, I guess. ^_^

Haha! *playing with pen*

click click clickity,
clickity clickity click,
click clickity click.

That is definately the best, you read that, and jsut laugh, and laugh and laugh and laugh...you were right...I really do enjoy it. *walks away playing with pen*

click click clickity...

i like them...the slightly random, yess, but that could be interprated as "intelligent" and "deep". I have to admit though, the pen one was pretty emotional...

keep it up!

For me hating haikus these are actually quite good. Well the last one especially, but thats not the point lol. O, by the way you should review my essay as you already said you would, but my pen name is Mademoiselle Dodd right, shutting up...now.

This are interesting. *stares at sentence for a moment* Okay, so my brain is fried, gimme a break . . . anyway, these are interesting. Some are totally random (much love to the egg-monster dude haiku, the pen one, and of course the haiku version of my sleepy song) and others are sorta meaningful. Most interesting.

Ok ok, I read the poem are you happy now? :p Actually these haikus are pretty good. Funny and random.