Impressive. Your writing is always emotive, but in this I can feel Justin's emotions through Krista. His calmness and sedateness is haunting.

My only problem is the portrayal of the guard - abuse of patients, such as throwing them forcefully, I find doubtful, at least in front of someone from the outside world . But that is a tiny and personal thing. Nothing at all, and it certainly does not detract from the whole of the story.

Also very nice; it reminds me of the story I wrote as a supplementary English assignment earlier in the year. Good work.